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AlextheAwesome 30 år

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Skrivet:
15 maj 2010 kl. 10:57

Min låttext som blev klar inatt:

Titel: Throwing me away (like a rag doll)


Why do you treat me like this
Why don't you get a life
Do you really think I'm that stupid
That I don't see what's going on
Lett me tell you something
You're wrong

You belive that I will just accept it
That I will just take it as it is
That it will be enough whit a sorry
And then I will take you back again
Lett me ask you something
Why

Your smiles
Your kisses
Your words
It all is a lie

Why are you doing this
Can't you just stop it
Why are you behaving like this
Don't you see
You're hurting me and pushing me down
Throwing me away like I was nothing worth
Just like I were a rag doll

You're playing with feelings and a broken heart
You thinkt that I won't see
That you will be able to lie to me
Whithout any consequences
Lett me tell you something
You're wrong

You're just fooling around
Like a dog whithout a leash
Behaving like an idiot
Trying to play me
Lett me ask you something
Why

Your smiles
Your kisses
Your words
It all is a lie

Why are you doing this
Can't you just stop it
Why are you behaving like this
Don't you see
You're hurting me and pushing me down
Throwing me away like I was nothing worth
Just like I were a rag doll

I'm standing here
Watching what you do
With a hidden anger and a faked smile
I meet your false ways
And you used me cuz you see me as weak

Why are you doing this
Can't you just stop it
Why are you behaving like this
Don't you see
You're hurting me and pushing me down
Throwing me away like I was nothing worth
Just like I were a rag doll

But soon, soon my friend
Soon it'll be me that smiles
It'll be me who has the power to fight
And it'll be me who leavs with my head held high
And the victory in my hands

Internetelitisten 32 år

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Skrivet:
31 maj 2010 kl. 20:49

Lyrics till våran nya EP.
http://alenahswe.blogspot.com/

Skvettis Kille, 31 år

2 684 forumsinlägg

Skrivet:
26 december 2010 kl. 23:47
Skvettis Kille, 31 år

Nu vill jag bar a poängtera att jag INTE har skrivit dessa, det är sångerskan i mitt band som har gjort det!

Deception/Deathwish

[Vers]

When endless winter nights was more than I could take,
I found the sacred kingdom of sleeping awake,
I plunged into a state of hibernation,
Hunting too deep for the missing revelation.

The earth felt different when I touched her dreamt-up ground,
And you became the sun that she revolved around.


[Chorus]

I will live to see the fall,
Live to see how I've betrayed them all,
And there is fire upon the earth.

I know I went too deep,
I brought a dream of darkness back from sleep,
I'd give my life for one more chance to redeem the oath.

Death to all empty words.


[Vers]

I crossed the gates of mist into a realm unknown,
Before I realised that I was not alone,
Too late I knew what dwelt inside of me,
A lurking chaos longing to be free.


[Stick]

I left all memories of vows behind,
As I strayed through the darkened halls of my mind,
I went down the stairs to a forbidden floor,
And dreamt the key that would unlock the final door.


[Brygga]

I once dreamt that I craved for you like dying grasses cry for rain.

[Chorus]

I will live to see the fall,
Live to see how I've betrayed them all,
And there is fire upon the earth.

I know I went too deep,
I brought a dream of darkness back from sleep ,
I'd give my life for one more chance to redeem the oath.

Death to all empty words.


[Brygga/Outro]

I once dreamt that I craved for you like dying grasses cry for rain,
If I had not been woken up I know I would have stayed.

I would have kept to what was nothing next to what I betrayed.


Låten finns att lyssna på här: http://myspace.com/decreation

Rehabilitering Kille, 29 år

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Skrivet:
28 januari 2011 kl. 19:09
Rehabilitering Kille, 29 år

Slog nyligen sönder min andra dator (som jag har alla texter på)
Men jag kan dela med mig av en, som jag skrev nyss. Titel: In stealth.

My eyes are so disfigured, i barely cant see.
I missing you so much, i just can't breathe.
Let me see you one last time, before an unforgettable goodbye.
Just so i can die in your arms.
Blood fills my lungs, torn heart stops to beat, i'll die with a grin.
A grin from ear to ear, made by knife.
Panic attacks starts to hunt me, break me down from the inside.
What's left of an inside, now rotten.
Locked in a nightmare, ill discard my life, like you discard me.
I'll put this silver to my wrist in hope of a saviour, i'm sorry.
Please just..
Im so cute (just in stealth)
Im so cute (just in stealth)
Im so cute (just in stealth)
Im so cute (just in stealth)

Just let every piece coincide.
Those lovely pieces is all i have left.
Stomped on my heart trying to kill it, slit its throat untill blood runs black.
You told me you would not leave me, you promised me. Then why did you?
Why? You know i would do anything for you, i always will.
I would bring the sky down, i would learn to fly just to be with you.
United, unbreakable, just abandon everything. Abandon love, passion,
nights that were wonderfull. Kill me, kill my family, kill my friends,
i would still love you. Those miles isn't the problem.
The distance isn't the problem, it's me. I'm just not good for you.
I would leave you and never call you again, if you asked for it.
But i hope we could still be friends. And i will love you.
But only in stealth.

Reconcile (4x)
Me with you.


Har inte orkat brytt mig om att lägga till vad som är vers o.s.v.
Men denna låt har ingen refräng i alla fall.

stvafel Kille, 32 år

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29 januari 2011 kl. 14:49
stvafel Kille, 32 år

visste ni att texter inte behöver rimma

MelodyMoonchild Tjej, 29 år

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29 januari 2011 kl. 14:54
MelodyMoonchild Tjej, 29 år

Citat från stvafel


visste ni att texter inte behöver rimma

klart dom inte behöver
dock är det väldigt personligt om man gillar låtar som rimmar eller ej
själv gillar jag låtar med rim :)

GulagOrkestra Kille, 30 år

5 329 forumsinlägg

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23 februari 2011 kl. 20:36
GulagOrkestra Kille, 30 år

Och du är frusen nu
Men jag är fortfarande kvar
Det finns solljus i iskalla dar'
Och du var lika ful som jag
När det satt röklukt i din sjal
Nu är ingenting som det var

Det var första refrängen till en låt som aldrig skrevs klart. Ca ett år gammal.

Avsky Kille, 31 år

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23 februari 2011 kl. 20:38
Avsky Kille, 31 år

En låttext jag skrek upp på ett rep, total improvisation.
JAG HAMNADE I HELVETET MEN INTE FAN VART JAG GLAD

ÅHHHH INTRÄDET KOSTADE TJUGO KRONOR

NEEEEEEJ

DET KOSTADE TJUGO KRONOR

JAAAAAAA

NEEEEEEJ

NEEEEEEJ

SEXTONTUSEN TJUGO KRONOR

DIN JÄVLA IDIOT

Heffe Kille, 30 år

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3 mars 2011 kl. 18:59
Heffe Kille, 30 år

hardstyle låt .text: never gonna be like you. (har klippt och mixat så nu går den ) Never Gonna be like You You You YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYOu UUUU

TheTraceur Kille, 31 år

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4 mars 2011 kl. 12:46
TheTraceur Kille, 31 år

Texter jag skrivit till mitt band ( Vi kör typ progressiv Deathcore if you're wondering. ) , låtarna är väll mest synpunkter på samhället och försöker också skriva om personliga problem.
Här är delar ur två låtar vi jobbar på:

Låttext 1.

Door to peace, please, can you open?

His mind's state is quite broken


Falling down towards the ground floor,

His mental state is much more than just sore.


Agitating sudden reactions

Get him a valuable distraction


Ignoring the past will only get things worse

Instead, confront the nightmare first.



Låttext 2.

Let me lose of this collapsing society

Erase my deliberant part of it


Set me free from this money-based hierchy

Since when did money equel happines?


Lies from above consume my entire life

Why is the truth always running?


Fear seems to supports our blind way of life

When will the curtain roll-up?


A Demoralized sickening way of thinking

seem to fill our very own world


Why am I the only one standing up?

Real care should always be shown


Rig the stage for the human exstinction

Unless you awake and react


Open your eyes and look further down the road

The answers will then be self-told

Luffare Kille, 32 år

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Skrivet:
26 mars 2011 kl. 01:52
Luffare Kille, 32 år

In every breath I take
For every moment to pass
I reach for the moon
And wake up beneath the ground

I am never to rest
Nor never to rise
The stench of the dead
Fills my inside out


I detest the I
The dead me in you
I detest the I
Betrayed by myself


Recall all of my fears
Recall all of the lies
In this web of the dead
Vengeance will drop it's disguise


I detest the I
the dead me in you
I detest the I
betrayed by myself


In every breath I take
For every moment to pass
I reach for the moon
And wake up beneath the ground


I detest the I
the dead me in you
I detest the I
betrayed by myself

maddafackaah Tjej, 33 år

37 forumsinlägg

Skrivet:
26 mars 2011 kl. 01:57
maddafackaah Tjej, 33 år

ja , ja skulle ju dock inte lägga ut egna texter här t.ex om ngn kan sno dom ? smart gjort av er :) iaf dom som vill komma ngn stans med musiken.. det var ju smart ;D

Luffare Kille, 32 år

2 108 forumsinlägg

Skrivet:
26 mars 2011 kl. 02:08
Luffare Kille, 32 år

tror du att någon här ändå kommer komma så långt med sin musik att det skulle bli ett problem?
plus att om man inte ens kan komma på en sketen låttext själv lär de knappast kunna skriva en låt och få ihop texten med den.
oooch det finns way bättre grejer att sno än det som postats här :D

GulagOrkestra Kille, 30 år

5 329 forumsinlägg

Skrivet:
26 mars 2011 kl. 02:13
GulagOrkestra Kille, 30 år

26 mil för dig

Text & Musik: Melker Appelquist



6/8 I C I Cadd9 I Am I Cadd9 I


Text

Take this silly lines and say what you've been told
Do what they ask you to do so you're aint going
Cold, x10

So come here and close your eyes and say what you feel for
We'll be all alone I'll make sure if that's what you feel
For, x10

And I'm sorry for these broken goodbyes, and my terrible lies
But it's just what I need cause I need to feel free
So I won't come home

gitarrsolo

And I know that it's all out for sure but I can't wait for more
Love is just what I need, cause l gotta feel free
So I won't come home

Jag drunknar för jag vet hur känns just när drömmarna bränns
Och jag kommer att skratta, ni kommer snart fatta
Att jag inte kommer hem
Kommer hem
Kommer hem

FNISS.

Gurkmeja Kille, 31 år

1 606 forumsinlägg

Skrivet:
10 april 2011 kl. 22:05
Gurkmeja Kille, 31 år

Den finns rykten om mig själv som jag aldrig vågat tro
Det finns platser här i stan där jag aldrig velat bo
Det du kallar evig vänskap kan ta slut i framtiden
Men än så länge känns det fint, om vi kan skilja nu från sen

Och jag har vänner som väntar på mig
Långt bort från skola och slit
Och vem som helst som tycker om mig
får gärna komma hit

Juni, juli och augusti sprang förbi som håltimmar
Och sommarns glädje och passion gick att spela på gitarr
En låt i mitten av ett album sammanfattar allt vi sett
Om det känns kul och fint och bra, behöver inget kännas rätt

Och vi har vänner som väntar på oss
Långt bort från ångest och sorg
Och vem som helst som vill fira med oss
åk hit till sommargöteborg

Livet skiftar som moln och väder
Tempot ändras snart igen
Hösten kommer till Sveriges städer
Nu tror jag att jag kan njuta av den

För jag har vänner som väntar på mig
Vi ger bort kärlek och skratt
Och vem som helst som vill ta för sig
Sjung med oss inatt


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